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Contributed by
europeanprincess
on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You left me lonely
Why did you leave?
My heart is small
And I grew mean
We keep in touch a letter or two
Water separates our holding hands
We had each other for a short time
Who ever knew this would hurt so much
You knew me well
We smiled each day
We kept our secret
What else can I say?
You asked me a question and I answered true
You felt a connection and I thanked you
We almost had a moments kiss
I wanted it so bad but didnt tell you this
As I try to end this right
I hide my sadness with some delight
We will see each other again
Not today nor tomorrow, but soon
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europeanprincess
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2007-01-31 14:54:29]
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Re: J
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 03:19:53 PM AEST
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europeanprincess, the past flames of love will never die or fade as it was a special blessing that was heaven made. Please enjoy the memories and try not to shed a tear because the love once had is forever near. You are so awesome and I can only ask that you may never consider placing your poetic pen down because your reading fans would miss you leaving us all with a sad frown. You are so wonderful.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: J
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by trialnerror on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:27:58 AM AEST
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its unbelievable, it's like i told u what i wanted to say and what i went through and u then wrote these words, amazing. i felt that poem telling my story.
i love it , well done! |
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