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now boarding
Contributed by
boobiepeach
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 06:21:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I do........ But with no hope
With no promise I sail and cope
You do... with outlining hope
Expectancy of indication to lope
I have left the dock of waste
Where nothing gained was that of haste
While you tease the toe of eagers time
Hesitating to board ship of kind
Leave the landing of wasted hope
And climb aboard the ships goal slope
Marina of loved and great time
But now with the fare its on your dime
I wont wait on that pier any longer
If I did, hope couldnt be any wronger
I choose the floating hotel of non belief
And not to stay on embankment of grief
I will see you soon on ocean liner
When faith runs out of wish to find her
No heavy annoyance of that harbor
On that boat no crave will be
Horizon, me, you, and the sea
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Re: now boarding
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 07:31:38 PM AEST
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boobiepeach, this is a very interesting composure by you as when faith runs out of wish to find her is a very powerful thing for many young men. You then go on to say that on that boat no crave will be which is a fact for sure as I commend you on a poem of deep meaning composed so beautifully. Well done.
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