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The Saviors Plea
Contributed by
isrred
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 10:23:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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You say you love me,
And faithful and obedient you will be.
I have said to love one another,
but you just love to judge your brother.
You see someone who from their youth
Have tried but struggled to tell the truth.
There is a woman who cant stop her continual fall,
Back to her problem with alcohol.
You know a man who not matter how hard he tries,
Cant help his attraction to other guys.
A teen who struggles to generate,
Happy thoughts and seems full of hate.
Someone who struggles with depression,
And often resorts to acts of aggression.
You meet them there,
And stop and glare.
You judge them in your heart and mind,
As their faults are easy for you to find.
You fill your heart with much contempt,
And to love them you do not attempt.
But you should look at them in adoration,
And thank your God its not your temptation.
Leave the part of judge to me,
The loving brother you should be.
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Re: The Saviors Plea
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:59:38 AM AEST
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write with your heart, not your hands.
in other words, if you have something to say, say it with your own self.
this is too aesthetic
sterile
Not a bad go, but put yourself into it.
(don't ever try to please anybody. ***** on em ^_^)
always, abraham |
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Re: The Saviors Plea
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by a7x36 on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 03:44:11 AM AEST
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| i really love this, it puts the spirit of Jesus into words |
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