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the tale of The Sinner & the Goddess
Contributed by
Immortal-Dragon21
on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 07:58:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I close my eyes, I will be home
If I close my eyes, I will be in heaven
How did it come to this?
Its all finished and its left me broken
We had the world on its knees
We used both hands to hug our wounds wandering eternally
So we run, away from the fears, away from the pain
There is no turning back now
Only the future breezes blow toward us
As we roll onward into eternity
Staring into us like a highway at midnight
With only the flicker of a streetlamp
To illuminate the void
For always I will stay with you
Rest eternally in the arms of angels
Protect me in my times of need &
Let them tell tales of our love
Tales of the sinner and the goddess
Copyright ©
Immortal-Dragon21
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2007-02-01 07:58:43]
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Re: the tale of The Sinner & the Goddess
(User Rating: 1 )
by Immortal-Dragon21 on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 08:03:51 AM AEST
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| A story of a young man who falls in love with a goddess who has come down to earth, but he is a sinner so they can never be together. She gets called back to heaven and the young man is heart broken in the end he fades to black & disappears |
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Re: the tale of The Sinner & the Goddess
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:48:03 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. this is more like a short story.. i really enjoyed this.. a very creative piece.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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