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Living Hell
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:16:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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" Living Hell "
I destroy homes, I tear families apart
I will take your children and thats just the start
I am more valued than diamonds,more precious than gold
the sorrow I will bring, is a disastrous site to behold
I live all around you, in schools, in town
I am the rich, and I am the poor
I am always down the street
I am even next door
I am made in a lab, but not like one youd think
I can even be made, in your own kitchen sink
Made in your childs closet, even out in the woods
if this scares you to death, it certainly should
I have many names, I have one you know best
everyones heard of me, my name is crystal meth
My power is awesome, try me and youll see
but if you decide to try me, you may never break free
Just try me once, I might let you go
but if you try me twice, I will own your soul
When I possess you, youll steal and youll lie
you will do what you have to, just to get high
The crimes you commit for my narcotic charms
will be worth the pleasure you feel in your arms
You will lie to your mother, steal from your dad
when you see their tears, you will feel really sad
Forget about your morals, how you were raised
I will be your conscience, I will teach you my ways
I take kids from their parents, parents from their kids
I take everything from you, even your pride will be hid
I will be there with you, where ever you are
I will always be with you, I will never be far
Youll give up on everything, your family, your home
your money, your friends, youll be all alone
I will take and take from you, no more can you give
when I am finished, youll be lucky to live
If you try me be warned, this is not a game
if I am given a chance, Ill drive you insane
Ill ravage your body, Ill control your mind
Ill own you completely, your soul will be mine
The night mares Ill give you, while lying in bed
my voices youll hear, from inside of your head
The sweats, the shakes, the visions you see
I want you to know, these gifts are from me
By then its too late, youll know in your heart
that you are now mine, and well never part
You will regret this, my users always do
you came to me! Not I to you!
Knowing this would happen, I know you were told
you knew my powers and chose to be bold
You could have said NO, then walked away
if you could live that day over, what would you say?
I am now you master, you are my slave
I will even take you, down to your grave!
Now that you met me, what will you do?
will you try me or not? Its all up to you!
I can show you more misery, than words can tell
come hold my hand, let me lead you to Hell.....
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2000 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2000 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2000 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2000 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
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MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: Living Hell
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:34:45 PM AEST
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Truer words were never spoken, a most essential peice of writting if ever there was. great style, and as for the content, that speaks for it self.
thank you kindly for the comment
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Re: Living Hell
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:13:19 PM AEST
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I like the way this flowed
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Re: Living Hell
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by heatherslostdreams on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 10:42:57 PM AEST
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Hey i just read this i think that it has a great meaning. I have been in homes were drugs have taking control and what you say is true things will never be the same. I wish that more people could read this and see what really goes on because all the ads that you see and stuff on t.v. doesn't come close to what really happens but i feel that your poem does express that thank you for writing this it touched me keep it coming!
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Re: Living Hell
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:25:59 AM AEST
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| So very very true. Very nicely written. |
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Re: Living Hell
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:59:53 PM AEST
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| mmmmmm.....long yet interesting. loved the concept and your vision about the drug. never took it and never will so i can not relate to the words; however i have seen others and truth be told to your words. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Living Hell
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:22:05 PM AEST
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Tweakers beware that there are hells worse then the one we make for ourselves and often find ourselves in. However being a care giver it is exactly this kind of fear and ignorance of an afterlife (for what is worth) that ultimately scares one into a 'what is it all for' mentality which then leads to the fleet of time induced to continue using till utterly dysfunctional. So much that the"Living Hell" is also then shared by those who give help and especially their families. A very provocative write.
Well Done
Peace
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