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The Look in Your Eyes
Contributed by
Milo
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Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I kick the dirt for the last time
Watching the sun fall in my mind
I remember the look in your eyes
How beautiful it was
Gleaming with love as it reflects our love of tides
How it change colors on me
It's all there is in the world I want to see
It was the sight of God
How God-giving it was
That it shine with angels
Over my head they float above
If I told you once, I told you hundreds of times
That nothing matches with the beauty of your eyes
So when they shed the crying tears
I will wipe them away for years and years
When they are sad with lies
I will remind them that our love won't die
When they are frightened with chilling fright
I will look through them until everything is alright
But when they are tired of this world,
Don't care and unforgiving all the way to the ending door
I will still remember that the eyes you behold
Is the love of the life I still want to hold
Copyright ©
Milo
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2007-02-01 13:02:58]
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by BornReckless on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:27:13 PM AEST
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| this is a very well thought out poem. good job |
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:32:47 PM AEST
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Milo, I really enjoyed the content of this wonderful poem. Good job.
Mickey Pig Knuckles |
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 07:14:36 PM AEST
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| Well done , an enjoyable read |
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by heatherslostdreams on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:30:42 PM AEST
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I think that this poem is very beautiful and shows how we can all take with us a piece of someone else beautifully written....like it alot keep it coming
yours truely,
heather |
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by Chussey on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 05:06:09 PM AEST
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| This is awesome, keep up the good work |
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Re: The Look in Your Eyes
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:15:46 AM AEST
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| love this very good. |
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