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Love Hard
Contributed by
Ratwick
on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 01:32:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Go hard
Go home
Know love
Know alone
Feel lust
Be the lush
Touch
Scream!-shh
Then hush
Embrace
Face to face
Trace skin
So hot
Tell her
Tell him
Float on
Words strong
Eyes gaze
Lost long
Short moment
Forever's
Never
Felt
So good
So hard
Go home
Know love
Know alone
Copyright ©
Ratwick
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2007-02-02 01:32:33]
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Re: Love Hard
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by girish on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:24:37 AM AEST
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its love, you don`t know how.
solitude measures the altitude
keep writing
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Re: Love Hard
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by Packatack on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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| Good poem and simple too. I can relate to it and thanks for writing it.! |
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Re: Love Hard
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:44:07 AM AEST
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| Nice flow. Good job. |
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Re: Love Hard
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by heatherslostdreams on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:28:13 PM AEST
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I like your poem it was good had a great flow and with your words your right you have to know how to do all that when your in love and with that feel. Yet with each love you find something different to feel. Great Write
keep it coming!
Your friend,
Heather
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Re: Love Hard
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 02:28:13 PM AEST
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Like the format and word play. Somehow I am reminded of a flick 'Pump up the Volume' where the protagonist urges to 'Talk Hard' I see you have taken this to its next logical step.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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