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Contributed by
Epic
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Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 09:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So I try
Try to do so much
Try to live my life
Try to overcome the tears
My eyes bleed from the ache
From the bruises and the pain
From what is ask from me
And from what I can give
So I try
So hard
That I just break down
And endlessly cry
I got so much on my plate
So much to handle
I feel its overwhelming
And far to great
So I try
To beat the odds
Beat myself senseless
Keep pushing on and on and on
I try to stay in there
Not give up not surrender
Because that would be so easy
So I just hang on for survival
Why?
I just want to give up
When all my energy is lost
I keep moving when all I want to do is die
I keep trying when my body tells me no
When the pain seems to grow
And when the world
Seems to be against me
So I try
I keep on moving
So I try
will someone
Please tell me
Why?
Copyright ©
Epic
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2007-02-02 21:58:23]
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Re: Try
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by irodethetrain2u on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:11:11 AM AEST
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I feel the same at many times. Life can be really tough, but I think it'll all be worth it in the end, regardless of whatever the end will be.
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Re: Try
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 02:23:56 PM AEST
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A deeply heartfelt piece filled with universal questions. I can only add we climb the mountain because its there so we overcome the pains of the unknown by simply facing them. This piece I hope helped you to face these questions and that someone will be you, to answer to your satisfaction, that to keep moving on is much better than standing still.
Please keep writing, posting, work it out here at the 'Y'
Peace
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