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HOW I FEEL
Contributed by
trialnerror
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Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 08:10:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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HOW I FEEL
The first time I laid eyes upon u
It was love at first sight
My heart jumped and the beats flew
But I sensed a tremendous fright
Will this dream last forever?
This heaven on earth moment
Will it end..I hopeNEVER
Its like I drank a love potion
All I ask from u is to be truthful
For us to crush the separating walls
In order for this love to be useful
And break each others falls
U ., are the one for me
I sensed it in my heart
U everyday, my eyes wish to see
I pray we never part
This poem is the least of how I feel
For us the rules of love will bend
My painful heart wounds, u did heal
I love you, with these words my poem will end
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2007-02-03 08:10:25]
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Re: HOW I FEEL
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 09:05:09 AM AEST
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I felt a calm come over me reading your words...
Some one is very lucky to have it...
Keep up the good words...
Thank You
Bill |
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