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Suck a Duck
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:34:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The friction is born on skin soft and moist
You speak words of comfort and ease
Two pairs of tattered shoes rest on the stairs
A case of dusty books never read
One two many roses, sit on the windowsill
My view of you approaching,
Obscured, the rain falls still
Your knocking hand extends to the doorframe
Nothing on, but your raincoat,
You smile, and I let you in
So begins the game
I crave you,
As much as I could get
I have been waiting for you
For so long now I forget
I have kept close
Your one and final debt
The mattress breathes deep
As the white bed-sheets soak up the sweat
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2007-02-04 09:34:50]
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Re: Suck a Duck
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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Oh my! is it hot in here or is it just this piece?? lol
Jyss .. this was masterfully crafted. And I don't say
that gratuitously .. there have been many poems
that dance around the subject but not with near as
much blurred clarity as this. Wow.
sensually poetic, my friend!
~Breezy |
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Re: Suck a Duck
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 11:32:30 AM AEST
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It sounds like the beginning of a great day...*grins*
Much enjoyed, dear poet.
~Scorp |
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