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THE FIRST WIFE
Contributed by
soulsearching43
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 10:55:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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RIGHT FROM THE BEGINNING I THINK I KNEW THIS LOVE WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE
I WAS SO YOUNG AND FULL OF LIFE THEN YOU MADE ME YOUR FIRST WIFE
THE TORMENT STARTED RIGHT AWAY I SHOULD HAVE LEFT THE VERY FIRST DAY
THE BEATINGS FOLLOWED THE PAIN WAS REAL THIS WASNT SUPPOSED TO BE PART OF THE DEAL
I THOUGHT YOU WOULD CHANGE IF ONLY YOU COULD SEE THAT NO ONE LOVED YOU MORE THAN ME
NOW IM OLD AND BEATEN DOWN MY SMILES TURNED TO A PERMANENT FROWN
I STAYED TO LONG THIS I KNOW NOW ITS TIME FOR ME TO GO
BUT BEFORE I LEAVE I HOPE YOULL SEE THAT BEING SO ANGRY IS NO WAY TO BE
I THINK I FINALLY UNDERSTAND ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE A STAND
NOW I KNOW I DESERVE A HAPPY LIFE SOMETHING I'LL NEVER HAVE IF I STAY YOUR WIFE
SO I'LL MOVE ON AND TRY TO HEAL ITS TIME FOR ME TO TAKE THE WHEEL
BUT DONT WORRY I'LL SURVIVE FOR LIFES JUST ONE BIG TEST DRIVE
I KNOW THAT GOD WILL SEE ME THROUGH 'HE KNOWS I'VE SEEN HELL' I WAS MARRIED TO YOU
SO I WRITE THIS NOW FOR WIFE NUMBER TWO BECAUSE NO ONE DESERVES TO BE BLACK AND BLUE
DON'T BELIEVE HIS CHARM OR HIS LIES LEAVE HIM BEFORE YOUR SPIRIT DIES
IF YOU DONT YOU'LL SOON FIND HE'S NOT THE MAN YOU THOUGHT WAS KIND
SOON HE'LL HAVE YOU BEGGING HIM TO STAY I KNOW IT SOUNDS CRAZY BUT THATS HIS WAY
HE SOMEHOW GETS DEEP IN YOUR HEAD AND MAKES YOU WISH THAT YOU WERE DEAD
THEN HE 'LL HAVE YOU BELIEVING IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT AND BEFORE YOU KNOW IT LIFE'S ONE BIG ASSAULT
AND JUST WHEN YOU REALIZE THAT YOU WANT TO LEAVE HE'LL TELL YOU HE LOVES YOU AND YOU WILL BELIEVE .
SO PLEASE HEED MY WARNING AND GET ON WITH YOUR LIFE YOU DONT WANT TO END UP LIKE HIS FIRST WIFE
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2007-02-04 10:55:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THE FIRST WIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by girish on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST (User
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let you be his only wife. if i have contact with Osama Bin laden, I will bomb your person.
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Re: THE FIRST WIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 05:06:18 PM AEST (User
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Wow, what a debut!!! Punch the page some more...you're Great at it!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: THE FIRST WIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 04:26:53 PM AEST (User
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| i think this was written well, expressing much emotion that comes through very clearly. the whole capital thing is something i don't care much for, but the poem made up for it. |
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