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This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 11:26:55 AM in AEST
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" And disagreement shall reign across
the land, as darkness slowly and most
medthodicaly seeps out of it's corrupted
container once known, as homosapiean.
Leaving a legacy of indelable blood stains.
hidieously embellishing a distorted land
scape, this lady once known,
as mother earth. "
i
know
not any
more and
couldn't care
less, how we humans
took nirvana and created
this mess.
this
loveless
enviorment
that wallows
in dirt,
this
lady
once known,
as mother earth.
the
ultimate
rape a violation
of sort, as though
for ever we'll live.
so nonchelant
we merrily
cavort,
taking more
than we're able
to
give.
and
where
do we go
when it's
all said
and
done
as
we mock
the constitution
while sodimizing the sun.
debating each other for
rediqulious rights as
each day we close
one more door,
while
children
are
dying
fighting
our fights
benificiaries
of our hellish
war.
and
who would
know better than
the lady herself, like
like a book of reference
on a library shelf.
as
we spit
in her face
while
depleting
her worth this
lady once known,
as mother
earth.
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by trulovaAKAthetruth on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 11:38:10 AM AEST
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I ALSO BELIVE WHOLE HEARTEDLY THAT THE HUMAN RACE HAS ALMOST DESTORYED WHATS LEFT OF THIS ONCE
BEUATIFUL PLANIT. NICE TO SEE THERE
IS SOMEONE WILLING TO ADMIT THIS
YOUR UNKNOWN FRIEND
THOMAS W HART JR
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 01:11:37 PM AEST
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very profound
i think half the populis feels this way
the other half is still being born
live in fear or perish
all things end
stars die like sons
plants dry to empty matter
all we can do
is slow down our process of accelerating
the stop
we have to watch instead of using
we have to listen instead of yelling
we have to take our time to grab one person at a time. instead of trying to change uneducated minds.
maybe this will buy our children's children another a day
but as certain is fact
all things come to an end
like viruses and cigarettes |
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 02:37:41 PM AEST
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this is a different style but its very wise.. I love the new approach you have taken.. its very beautifully done.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 10:54:38 AM AEST
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I noticed more than a few misspelled words, but other than that; this piece had a wonderful flow and message. My heart is with yours in your cry for Mother Earth. Thank you for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:50:58 PM AEST
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" And disagreement shall reign across
the land, as darkness slowly and most
methodically seeps out of it's corrupted
container once known, as Homo Sapiens.
Leaving a legacy of indelible blood stains.
hideously embellishing a distorted land
scape, this lady once known,
as mother earth. "
I
know
not any
more and
couldn't care
less, how we humans
took nirvana and created
this mess.
This
loveless
environment
that wallows
in dirt,
this
lady
once known,
as mother earth.
The
ultimate
rape a violation
of sort, as though
for ever we'll live.
so nonchalant
we merrily
cavort,
taking more
than we're able
to
give.
And
where
do we go
when it's
all said
and
done
as
we mock
the constitution
while sodomizing the sun.
Debating each other for
ridiculous rights as
each day we close
one more door,
while
children
are
dying
fighting
our fights
beneficiaries
of our hellish
war.
And
who would
know better than
the lady herself, like
like a book of reference
on a library shelf.
as
we spit
in her face
while
depleting
her worth this
lady once known,
as mother
earth."
Had to run the spell check and compare in case you were taking liberties. I really like the sentiment and thrust of this piece however penned it is heartfelt and in my opinion deserves praise and applause for giving treatment to our Mother Earth.
Please Keep the Pen Flowing.
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:22:28 PM AEST
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Besides the few mispelt words, this work of art is written so well~ Sadly it's todays relaity. People aren't looking after our percious 'Mother Earth'. Well done and thanks so much for sharing this with us~
many hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: This Lady Once Known As Mother Earth . . . MHV
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 04:13:12 AM AEST
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| The title dragged me in..I am not disappointed..Subject & expressions are good. its welldone. venkat |
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