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The dream?
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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From the sea of open land
To the vortex straight thru gone
A vision of emptiness
Seeming most beautiful of one
Where the trigger of symbols
Is only courious
To those who lost they're way
The nothing
The nothing you forget
When you awake
The nothing
It was something
But it's nothing
Now it's day
From the ocean of reality
Past the understanding
Of the subconcoius
Seemingly, what is beautiful?
All now gone
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rhei76
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2007-02-04 12:53:58]
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Re: The dream?
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 01:37:58 PM AEST
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A most well presented writting of thruth. Nicely done.
also thank you kindly for your comment.
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Re: The dream?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:02:11 PM AEST
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very good write.. I liked the flow I especially liked the line "the nothing was something"
a bit of wisdom in this write great job
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