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Your Evilness Of Lust
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 11:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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" Your Evilness Of Lust "
I know now just who you are
I am sorry that we ever met
I just made a good decision
its one I won't regret
I do not want to ever see you
nor look into your shallow eyes
you are such an evil person
always telling hurtful lies
You had yourself another lover
I did not know this when we met
you really showed me you don't care
you have no heart nor self respect
I quickly saw an evil cheater
a scum bag liar and deceiver
you just can't be a little honest
a man like you does not love her
You said to me that its ok
to play and sneak around
no one really cares or knows
as long as its not found
I have built myself a life
its full of love and trust
I have no room or place for you
your Evilness Of Lust
You lie and deceive way too many
you do not love your wife
now I say get away from me
go and live your miserable life!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: Your Evilness Of Lust
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:34:56 PM AEST
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excellent disbelief in someone you could have loved.
the shallowness that crushes the heart to build walls.
unfortunate things of these are grey instead of wrong.
Your words ring loud.
the anger i'm sure many have felt. |
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Re: Your Evilness Of Lust
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 10:17:31 PM AEST
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This piece is an angry light saber cauterizing as it cuts.
A kind of exorcism or bobbing to 'get thee behind me' in rhythm with its metric. A realization made perhaps around a barbecue backyard party and it hits like a ton of bricks this person is WRONG and you can't get enough distance too quick.
Well Done
Peace
Yang
PS Your post-script runs as film credits rolling like having watched a short at Cannes |
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Re: Your Evilness Of Lust
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 04:49:47 AM AEST
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wow!! this is amazing I love it Yes, yes i do!! Wow factor, thank you once again for speaking the words i not know how. I loved this, I felt and have lived everyword you inked.
love n hugs - your dedicated poet
Louisa xx
BBRymz |
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