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in this light
Contributed by
rhei76
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Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:19:50 PM in AEST
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Yes, I said
I said
In this light
In this light
Our sad song becomes darker
Our homes become farther
The tones of history
still seem not to alter
the space we've grown
inbetween us
Yes, I feel
I say
I feel
In this light
Our emotions drag the water
Our motions from the past faulter
The bones of history
That lead us untrusting
If only we would of been
A little more humble
Maybe we wouldn't be so misleading
Oh, I love you
But in this light
Our backstabbing is luminated
And our sad souls are countered
From all we've done
I wonder
If so
What would we become
I said
Yes, I said
In this light
In this light
I love to see ya
But we've driven to far from home
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2007-02-05 13:19:50]
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Re: in this light
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 07:42:11 PM AEST
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Wow, this poem is sad. " I love to see ya
But we've driven to far from home " this line hit me like a ton of bricks. You are a most worthy writter. Able to convey a true scence of beauty even in times of sadness. So finnal that line is. Lovely presentation as well.
thank you kindly also for your comment
myheartsvoice
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