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~Goveast~
Contributed by
misfitme
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Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:06:45 PM in AEST
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He was to the world, Nickademus Goveast~
A man undeniably apart...
In love with love, music, women & feast~
His own drum unto life, the beating heart
Within his chest was housed a lions pride~
Having once wooed the moons self with his song
With nomadic grace was gifted his stride~
No one place allowing him to belong
His abundant passion barely contained~
In the home it had made of his soul
Its craving for beauty within him reigned~
And into all which he created, stole
A true child of the sun without sire~
Born on earth, the only mother to him known
While a twin sister forged by the same fires~
Into a far different world was thrown...
She was called at birth, Noella Goveast~
And was undefinable from the start...
Defying the laws of both man & priest~
To make hers a life of knowledge & art
Within her mind there lived a need to know~
The endless answers to wherefore & why
Never unasked did she let a question go~
Even with, "the powers that be" unshy
She was a work of art that suffered no frame~
Her own beauty a mirror unto lifes
Ever evolving in both face & name~
She had been daughter, mother, queen & wife
Undiminished stayed his love & respect~
Though her company little did he keep
She was to him that which all beauty reflect~
While his own wanderlust disturbed her sleep...
to be continued...
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2007-02-05 15:06:45]
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 04:16:33 PM AEST
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What an excellent telling of this tale. So much that I would love to know more. This piece has the metric of the old world a kind of fist pounding in time to its rhythm.
Bravo
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 05:50:03 PM AEST
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Oh my my my! This was FABULOUS! I mean, it IS fabulous!!
So soft and beautiful, your words. They are a means of transport that
carries us back into a place that time forgot. It's utterly gorgeous!!
Exceptional piece. I can't say enough on this. This is truly poetry.
And an exquisite piece of art. BRAVO!!!
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 08:05:49 PM AEST
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You are certainly one of the top poets on here, your a true craftsman as well as artist, i feel your creativeness in this masterpeice. A lovely poetic endeavour. Beautifuly and very
skillfully presented. Most enjoyable to read.
Thank you also for your comment.
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:42:53 AM AEST
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An excellent poem, exquisitely crafted and easy to read because the rhythm is so expressive. I can't wait to read the continuation!
Thank you also for your comment on one of my poems.
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:03:30 PM AEST
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Whoa, Missy!! What's a superlative to excellence? This flowed like the mightiest river and shined like the most glorious star! Be back fer the continuation.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: ~Goveast~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:23:14 PM AEST
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I have missed you and your wonderful
poetry my dear friend. What a delightful pleasure it is to be back and reading your marvelous writings~ You are by far one of
my favourite and top poets here @YPDC dear MissyMe.
A beautiful story written so well. I am wanting to know so much more and I await the continuation of your outstanding work my sweet Moon Maiden.
*simply beautiful hun*
with love from ur fan~
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