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Self-destructive--
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
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Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 11:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Sympathize
***** all the lies,
I like those rivers on your wrists
Shells of bodies,
Hearts in pieces
Broken glass and bloody fists
You say you died
My helps not needed,
But yet you hide the blade,
Until,
The distant whisper in your head,
Now screams,
And is telling you to kill
Cobras fatal bite
Preferred to a lovers venomous kiss
Stained with tears and blood are lips,
From all the lies so sweetly said,
Lets all jump into the abyss
As if were not already dead
Forgive us Father, for we have sinned,
Weve wished death on this whole town,
Consumed in sin,
It crawls our skin,
Ashes, ashes, we all fall down.
*August*
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Re: Self-destructive--
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:22:34 AM AEST
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drtylilsecret, now this is a very creative piece of reality for many in todays society and the message contained actually has quite a history throughout time. Thank you for sharing a bit of your creative personality and your wonderful talent with all of us. Good job.
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