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i'll miss you
Contributed by
jdawg
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Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 03:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm one step away, from the edge, and I feel the rocks start to crumble.
I can't even breath, or shed a tear, cuz the slightest thing, could make me tumble.
What do I do now, how do I escape, the tragedy about to be endured?
I stepped to the edge, to free my mind, but there's no turning back now that's for sure.
What have I done, how could I be so stupid, to enflict my life with such danger?
but there's no where to go now, and nothing I can do, It's in the hands of my savior.
Will he let me fall, or help me walk away, from the life threatning situation I put myself in?
I began this world, full of hopes and dreams, but i guess every beginning must have an end.
I tried so hard, to make everyone happy, that i've forgotten about me.
now i have noone to turn to, and noone to help me, all I have is a hopless dream.
A dream of a happy life, with a happy ending, to share with a loving wife.
but that dream's not coming true, now look where I am, I'm praying for my life.
I guess this is goodbye, this looks like the end, there's only one rock left to fall.
And it's the one im on, and it's breaking away, the angels!! I can hear them call!
A tear drop falls, the last rock breaks, now im falling with nothing to hold on to.
As I fall to my death, I take a deep breathe, and softly whisper, I'll miss you.
by justin l.
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2007-02-06 03:30:12]
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Re: i'll miss you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 04:17:41 AM AEST
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Interesting writing style and it works perfectly
This is a beautiful write. Keep up the good work
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Re: i'll miss you
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by lilblkcat on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:45:58 PM AEST
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| This was an amazing poem. I absolutely loved it. |
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