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Heaven
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 07:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I died and went to Heaven last week.
Life up here is great but life on Earth was bleak.
People were mean to me on Earth and it brought me to tears.
But people treat me like I'm a winner up here.
The streets are made of gold and the people don't cuss or yell.
I'm really glad that I came here instead of going to Hell.
I met God yesterday and he said that he loves me.
Now my life is great and I'll be here for eternity.
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2007-02-06 07:50:00]
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Re: Heaven
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:02:00 AM AEST
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randyjohnson, I like your insights of heaven and the creative way you project them for your readers to see. Nice poem.
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