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He Really Was The Best
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:49:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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" He Really Was The Best "
The sad loneliness of the mornings
my thoughts are always of him
head now resting on my pillow
I've been feeling kind of grim
The sad tear drops from my eyes
slowly flowing down my face
I miss him as now I know
he is within gods warm grace
Laying alone on our empty bed
his pillow to my breast
wishing he was here with me
He Really Was The Best
I gaze into the bathroom mirror
I brush my hair aside
I look into my blood shot eyes
see I'm dying inside
I step into the shower
water cascading over my shoulder
brings memories of his gentle touch
as the water now gets colder
I wrap the towel around me
I feel my body shiver
remembering his arms around me
he always made me quiver
I get dressed as I ponder
why god has called my love
He Really Was The Best
now living in heaven above!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: He Really Was The Best
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:05:11 PM AEST
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thanks for your comment, and that was a very sad write, but very beautiful too. i hope you dont speak from personal experience, but overall, thanks for sharing.
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Re: He Really Was The Best
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by heatherslostdreams on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:53:49 PM AEST
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Hey friend.
i absolutely love this poem and like i said in the pm i wrote you me and you write about very similar things. this kinda helps me deal with the emotions that im putting in my next piece. this poem is very beautiful and sad and made me cry thinking of someone it touched me deeply because i have one that was the best one too that has gone on great write and keep it coming i greatly enjoy reading you have your way of bringing me in and getting me wrapped in all that you write. you are very talented.
your friend
heather
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Re: He Really Was The Best
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 04:43:59 AM AEST
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Awe i have a lump in my throat, you have described my all to familiar mornings.
Thank you so much for easing the words and grafted so beautifully i just cant express, always admiring my dear friend MPK.
Louisa xx
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Re: He Really Was The Best
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 07:53:58 PM AEST
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I feel this as a wound in ache. Such a truly heartfelt post from a good soul. Many blessings as time stretches the empty spaces and lets the depth of loving to flow freely.
Great Memoriam
Peace
Yang
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