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Happily Ever After
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:56:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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" Happily Ever After "
She now sits all alone with her broken heart her eyes are in a daze her life is now confusion future taken away her world is just a maze She holds her head up high never loosing hope she wipes back all the tears the words of love once heard fading in her past she hears them faintly echo in her ears She gently holds her hands clutching her past love she slowly bows her head she wonders is life worth living its hard to carry on she thinks its better to be dead It was that other woman wedging in between that came to steal his heart he wanted her young beauty eyes as cold as ice he thought that he was smart She hears her child crying missing all the love she knows just what to do I am sorry precious child she holds her little hand its now just me and you A few years pass her by still thinking of her man while walking down the street a very good looking man slowly passed her by and then they came to meet He looked into her eyes suddenly mesmerized he cleared up her confusion was this beautiful lady real? standing here with him or just another illusion They decide to set a date dinner and a movie right there on the street they glance up to the sky a twinkle in their eye a blessing that they meet Just a few months later he had a gift for her a diamond engagement band he got down on his knees looked into her eyes he asked her for her hand She smiled oh so warmly tears flowed down her face her daughter screamed out yes it was just three months later in a little church she wore her wedding dress Two sad souls now were joined both becoming one the confetti lay on the street a union made in heaven a destiny their fate a blessing that they meet Living Happily Ever After once upon a time in a small little town embracing their beautiful love each and every day neither have a frown Many years have passed growing old together he strongly loves her so he holds her hand and says I love you I'll never let you go!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 12:40:24 PM AEST (User
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wow this is beauitful.. its like a story that unfolds.. i like the pic that goes with it.. loved this piece.. enchanting!!
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 12:56:07 PM AEST (User
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What an excellent tale of continuation to support the aphorism 'It is better to have loved and lost than never to have lost at all." A strong encouragement toward moving on in the face of loss and bereavement.
An excellent homage to this couples union.
Bravo
Peace
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:39:31 PM AEST (User
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excellently structured and delievered
nice work |
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by heatherslostdreams on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:11:06 PM AEST (User
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hey friend,
yet agian another wonderful piece. I like the story form of this write and how it flows goes good with your signature thing. good write friend i feel as if me and you are feeding off each other here but thanks for sharing cant wait to read more.
your friend
heather
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sena on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:20:21 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful write! I can relate to the woman. Reading this gives me hope. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Happily Ever After
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 12:33:09 AM AEST (User
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An excellent and very well penned piece of poetry. I love how you brought this across to your reader. A top notch read. I thoroughly enjoyed it~ Thanks so much for sharing it~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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