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Someone Who Cares
Contributed by
Ari
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Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:01:55 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Fears racing around like cars in my head Worried about what was better unsaid Water is great unless you don't want to tread Should've just waited until the dog got fed
Gold is great unless thats not what you mined Could've figured youd just want to unwind In time you may see that you wanted to find Just another soul to treat you kind
But thats not the way it is Oh no We just keep on keepin on For show Living someone else's dream For what? Just give me my smile back I'll trade it to someone else...
Passion for words, not quite there How does it feel when they laugh and stare Laughing behind just really isnt fair Then again, do they really even care?
Reading someone else's mind, a dream Never really knowing quite how you seem The winner is whom? Which team? When the loser just beams
But thats the way it could be Just think When everyone just knows What to drink Except for me I don't know But I will one day I'll get my smile back And trade it to someone Someone who cares...
Copyright ©
Ari
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2007-02-07 21:01:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Someone Who Cares
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:12:03 PM AEST (User
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Ari, this is an awesome poem with great meaning that I think many will be able to relate to. Thank You for sharing your creative personality with all of us and for sharing a little of yourself. Great Poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Someone Who Cares
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 07:19:18 AM AEST (User
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A wonderful poem to read, with carefully chosen words I truly enjoyed reading this poem . congrats.
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