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Wishful Thinking
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:19:27 PM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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How quickly shortened days deceive
Our reckless minds to soon believe
That an early night the day could weave;
And through its moon the sun well mourn;
This wintry vigil, an attempt forlorn.
Though the heedless day will soon retrieve
The hiding sun to grant reprieve,
Alas, it will abruptly leave;
And another moon it will adorn,
Until the morrow it is reborn.
Lost within this somber day
As wilted dreams wither away,
Weltering in ceaseless dismay;
In these falling flakes my hope resides
That soon Ill pass my frigid strides.
While the singing birds of May
Will change the gloom and dreary gray
Yet these dismal nights betray
With racy dreams of vernal tides,
For which my lonely heart abides.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2007-02-07 21:19:27]
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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Oh Wiz~ a bout of winter blues my friend. Do perk up for this season does not last long I say. It's so much easier said than done though. Big *hugs* and may your blues settle real quick my dear friend.
An excellent post. Thanks so much for sharing it with us~
warm hugs & best wishes,
sue m |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 12:28:17 PM AEST
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Hey Paul, the groundhog predicts an early spring. Hang on. I really enjoyed this piece o' work o' yers. So hopeful and yearnin' ... and ready 'n' willing for warmth ...
wabl
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 08:52:42 AM AEST
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Woo... I truly enjoyed reading your poem. great imagination and perfect words to match the content.
Hat's off to you my friend.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 09:24:08 AM AEST
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hey now i like winter lol.
will wiz spring is sure on its way.
awsome write
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 03:01:21 PM AEST
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| Great poem.Thanks for sharing. Oceandreamer |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 03:05:42 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 12:53:36 AM AEST
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this speaks many volumes bro.. and is totaly relative to my own idle days.. (as you know)
when hibernation of body and mind seems to be all the rave..
(7 seasons.. and counting)
lol.. has it been that long??
*raising my glass, to 7 more*
B
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:21:44 AM AEST
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Very good work, friend.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by catz77 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 06:20:45 AM AEST
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great write wizard
catz |
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Re: Wishful Thinking
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:18:17 AM AEST
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| You are extremely talented |
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