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With you my life I would spend
Contributed by
jdawg
on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 02:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Tears are falling, her name im calling,
But no responce is all I get.
Falsly taken dreams, or so it seems,
So alone again I sit.
While looking out the window, Watching the cars go,
Left breathless when each one goes by.
But none were yours, and for pain no cures,
So again I start to cry.
I have my problems, Alone I can't solve them,
But for help I'm afraid to search.
For self infliction, May become addiction,
I'm so scared right now it hurts.
Please don't blame you, For what I'm goin through,
It started way before then.
Self control, I can no longer hold,
Im afraid I'm close to my end.
Even though with us together, I was better,
But I still hated me.
Built inside, was the pain I'd hide,
Just longing to be free.
So lost In my own world, Fetaly curled,
Hiding from my past.
That it took to long, to realize your truelly gone,
Everything happen just so fast.
I'm not saying you don't love me, For you do I truelly see,
Just so many questions left unanswered.
To scared to mention, But have every intention,
Cuz locked away it eats at me like cancer.
I love you so much, Your face I long to touch,
Your soft lips again I long to kiss.
But since I'm not stable, And only hopefully able,
These memories I can only miss.
Just please don't turn away, Even if you choose not stay,
For atleast I want you as a friend.
It's better then nothing, And I'll have you as something,
Although with you forever, my life I would spend.
by justin 2/8/07
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jdawg
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2007-02-08 02:45:56]
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Re: With you my life I would spend
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 12:21:08 PM AEST
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jdawg, I have read a couple of your poems and I am so impressed with your refined ability as you write with such an emotional intensity. My hats off to you as I say well done.
Your friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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