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soul
Contributed by
untitled
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 01:30:34 PM in AEST
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SOUL
grip your heart
make your life
help you
haunt you
betray you
make you mind
make you
Without soul
you'd be nothing
The same thing, day in and day out
everyone else would be a mirror
just like you
you like them
same person,
same person
everywere
Without your soul
you'd be empty
A hollow shell, living, breathing, existing,
empty
without soul
you wouldn't be you
you won't have those sour, bitter, killing moments
that make happy thoughts sweeter
Soul
grips your heart
holds you life
and never, ever lets go
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2007-02-08 13:30:34]
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Re: soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:06:17 PM AEST
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*is astounded*
Very compelling ... the title and what lies beneath is
quite gripping. that last line ... good lord, what a notion!
It is quite the summation!
I was both lost and found within the words.
Great post!
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