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seconds
Contributed by
glue
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 03:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Its actually historic
Looking back on the times, from the golden ages to each ones individual downfall
And was said by "Shel Silverstein" that it was almost perfect but not quite
She had something going
For you can actually grasp each ones situation
In the fact that were all different, it seems most want one thing
To be loved and to be loved back, Is something that most would hope for
And although relationships reflect each ones personality
Its best to be judged when no ones watching, than a stadium with all eyes on you.
To be completely honest I would give back every moment of regret
As most would say they do
But the overwhelming majority have a guilty pleasure, in each personal crime they commit.
Those who'd give back show the real change, and considering those who live routine are the ones that happen to fall into this category
They are more than happy that everydays the same.
So I guess human activity in social situations lack more than every other
When someone else can exceed you in everything your good at.
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glue
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2007-02-08 15:21:55]
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Re: seconds
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:12:03 AM AEST
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the end is confusing
almost like you stopped short
not in your ending
but in what your trying to say
like you became self conscious and
second guessed yourself
and the beginning
had you left off -it's actually historic-
it would've been stronger.
in any case, i don't post if i don't like
and that's compliment enough to me
but for you:
I liked it.
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Re: seconds
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:13:04 AM AEST
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Nice poem, very good job
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