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Running Backwards
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:03:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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To live life
Running backwards
Down the center
Of the street
Teetering occasionally
Into the brink
Of oncoming
Traffic
As it spills its
Innards into the
Pale resistance
Of the moon
Is to live
An empty life
An empty life
As empty as
A fine dream
Or
A Fine silk
Woven lightly
Into the flesh
Of a womans
Smile
Slithering back
Between her legs
To coil
In the pleasure
Of a warm bath
Copyright ©
iodinelove
... [
2007-02-09 00:03:27]
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Re: Running Backwards
(User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:25:30 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem.
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Re: Running Backwards
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:10:28 PM AEST
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| Very creative. I liked it. Nice job. |
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Re: Running Backwards
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:29:51 PM AEST
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I liked this and since the author expressed not knowing what it is lets declare it as a voice from the other side of madness which is genius.
Peace
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Re: Running Backwards
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 12:01:04 AM AEST
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I dig the way this flows
well done |
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