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Die in Formation
Contributed by
boredoms_burden
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:07:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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With my eyes I see and feel, I hate and love, but i cant believe its real
With your eyes you break and fix, you take and give, but i cant believe its real
So I invite you to make me feel to make my body feel real
Cause time has taken a turn on me and time will blind all I see
So I invite you to break whats wrong and I invite you to just hold on
Will you break what we call reason, will you break what we call reality
I cant wait while I'm standing so tall
I cant wait for life to make me feel
You dont see me, youll never see me
While I'm reaching out to you
Cause you dont know me and you cant control me
I cant make you see whats real about me
They look and they see what they choose to see
But my mind chooses what it wants be
And I'm not as empty as you think
Cause my mind is turning and you dont see a thing
I dont conform to be anything that I'm not
I dont fallow after the next one in line
Maybe you think to shallow and think what others want you to think
But not me i refuse to be a another cookie cutter person
But choices make me the way that I am today
So think what you want , but your the one whos going to die trying to be like everyone else
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Re: Die in Formation
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by Whatsername on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:16:43 PM AEST
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| That was absolute brilliance. I loved every word. Excellent choice of words, they flowed and allowed the reader to perceive how you turely feel. Wonderful job!!! |
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Re: Die in Formation
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by London_Falls on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:21:11 PM AEST
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| absoloutlety exellent, great write you are a poet |
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Re: Die in Formation
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 03:31:20 PM AEST
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| I likes it. I was a little confused, but I got the point and I liked it. |
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