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Grains of sand
Contributed by
sinned
on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 03:27:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Worlds troubles in some archive
Somewhere; Oh where
A child missing
All hope declines
The world goes on
Bees in a beehive
Water rising levies droop
Snakes in the grass
Young lovers yearn
Filthy flies
A black child hungry
A step in dog poop
Who dares
Young men young women
A country calling
A hungry child dies
Mothers and babies cry
Not all care
Global warming
A cold chilled sweat
Wind sand blasting
Gone a humvee
Ice age looming
Sun tanning
Three thousand too many
Hi mom today I'm fine
Freedom's never free
Except for some
Of my country what can I get
Orphan and nanny
A child dies
Hungry
Bloody sand
Let freedom ring
Young man and woman brood
Far away a soldiers lonely cries
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sinned
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2007-02-10 15:27:45]
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Re: Grains of sand
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:48:14 AM AEST
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excellent piece.
the grains of sand feel so sad and heavy. |
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Re: Grains of sand
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:22:46 AM AEST
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a beautiful write.. so sad .. but well expressed in this.. loved the wording.. I enjoyed this piece awesome job
vampyress jenni |
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