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The Last Chivalrous Knights
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True
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Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 12:01:37 PM in AEST
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A knight is sworn to valor
His honor is his life
And he will stand a valiant soldier
Through toil, fear, and strife
His heart knows only virtue
No evil is within
And he will live his life
Righting wrongs and battling sin
His blade defends the helpless
From the powerful, the strong
And protects them from all
Who would do them wrong
His might upholds the weak
When all others strength doth fail
He will lift them up
That good should still prevail
His word speaks only truth
Though lies arent sticks and stones
They can still cause pain
Shattering trust if not shattering bones
His wrath undoes the wicked
Weaving webs of their own creation
Catching spiders in their traps
To the flies jubilation
The last chivalrous knights
Following the last chivalrous codes
A blessing to mankind
Righting wrongs and easing loads
I built this poem around Bowens old code from the movie Dragonheart.
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by Channing on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 12:48:41 PM AEST
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Very interesting write, and you are right, Knights are a dying breed. Good job!
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 01:15:54 PM AEST
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Mmmm... I liked this poem ..... I have met many Knights .... some may have fallen enroute ... but today I have found my Knight in shining armour .....
Here's to the Knights out there, where would we be without them...
Beautifully written
Dee xx |
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by doug on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 06:54:55 PM AEST
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I think this is excellent. I wonder what
our country would be like today if their
were more people like this. What a cool idea it would be if someone were to start some
kind of charity organization whose members
were sworn to live by such a code. Think how
much good they could do. Love this poem.
Truly , Dusty |
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 03:39:16 AM AEST
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I found your write a most interesting one. I remember helping my nephew with his assignment about Knights last year. I found out some fascinating facts.
You have penned this well. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for posting it~
*warm hugs*
sue m |
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by Dom on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 01:19:35 PM AEST
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I really liked the rhythm in this poem. I wish there were more men like this around!
Good work,
Dom |
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Re: The Last Chivalrous Knights
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by DeeMeister on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:58:24 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading your poem - it reminded me of the mythical Athurian tales that I loved as a child. |
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