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Jealousy or Crazy?
Contributed by
europeanprincess
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Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 01:41:17 PM in AEST
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Jealous with rage I stay away
I try so hard to do no harm
I take a drive to clear my head
With one quick thought I wish him dead
This is not right I must be insane
Mental health will cure my pain
A bottle wont drown my sorrows
Slashing wrists are not the answers
The sex was great oh how he knew
I burst out load I wanted more
He followed through his manly goal
My legs became a little sore
Complications arose as time went on
No more knocks at my door
Who was the new woman in his home?
Can I stab her on his floor?
Foolish thoughts enter my mind
I have to stop theres more time
Wake up happy its another day
Get out of bed and play
Hell be in my heart for ever more
But I love him no more
I might be jealous or crazy at times
But Ive grown and will be just fine
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Re: Jealousy or Crazy?
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:34:47 PM AEST
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europeanprincess, I really liked the emotional journey of this beautifully composed by you. I was glad by the time I reached the end because I saw a new stronger person that matured. You be one awesome poet and one many truly admire. Thank you so much for giving us yet another master piece and especially for giving us all a little more of you.
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Re: Jealousy or Crazy?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:49:24 AM AEST
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this is avery expressive wise write.. I have a jealousy problem myself so this is familar to me.. its a very creative write on this and i really liked this piece great job
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