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Rough Hands
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 01:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Memories carry,
and the years they claimed.
promise myself, remember.
She`s not you,
but carries the Spring,
stick`im notes when I forget.
In burnt fields
we move forward,
grace touches rough hands.
She is not years, but willing"
a heart to me,
that means every moment,
a gift I receive, at no occasion,
a breath.
This is for you,
that spring rain, waiting somewhere,
a note sent in the wind,
a written maybe,
placed in a heart...waiting. Vincent
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crow
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2007-02-11 13:54:47]
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Re: Rough Hands
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by shelby on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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This is beautiful hun. Serene and tender reaches out of this. I loved the spring rain, waiting somewhere....... a note sent in the wind, bravo!
hugs
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Rough Hands
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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OH my .. that last stanza is completely captivating !
Such tender words .. and so gracefully set down ..
beautiful, Vincent
~Breezy |
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Re: Rough Hands
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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Vincent~ my this is so beautiful my friend.
The spring rain, waiting somewhere, a note sent in the wind. A captivating, tender and very well written piece of poetry. Your work is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poetry with us~
*warm poetic hugs n smiles*
sue m |
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Re: Rough Hands
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:44:10 AM AEST
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wow this is a very exquisite piece of work and its beatifully worded.. I especially like the end
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Rough Hands
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:41:54 PM AEST
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A song of synchronizing between love & hope, worlds come and gone. There is a melancholy that holds the 'note' in place and a joy in waiting.
Bravo
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Rough Hands
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:30:55 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful.. i really love this sooo much, its like a breath blown softly....
love n' hugs nessa |
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