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A true friend
Contributed by
jdawg
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Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 12:50:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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He to watch his friend suffer,
Simply is no friend,
He who truely is,
Will lend two helping hands.
He to watch his friend make a Mistake,
Again is no friend,
He who truely is,
Will help void the mistake, to the best he can.
He who stands aside,
To scared to say a word,
To warn a friend of falling,
Simply is no friend and a coward.
He to lead a friend the other way,
So fall his friend does not do,
Then deep inside a friend he is,
A friend who is thoughtful and true.
He to watch a friend cry,
A friend not of you,
A friend to help dry your tears,
Is a friend loving and true.
Now he to make his friend cry,
No air he deserves to breath,
But he who does through happiness,
A friend he will always be.
by justin 2/11/07
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Re: A true friend
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:29:37 AM AEST
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Deep meaning in this poem. Sometimes friends can care too much which makes them weak, frightened to comment with the fear of breaking you. It's true a friend should look past this and Tell you when you are destroying yourself, when you make mistakes,which roads to try and take.
but if you know these things, then NOW you have learnt a lesson and just maybe it's your turn to help him by just being you the person he cared about but was to weak to help you.
good luck nice work
Dee xx |
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Re: A true friend
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 06:13:59 AM AEST
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| Sounds like you have the wisdom of a true friend. Excellent way to write if. |
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