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point in question
Contributed by
rhei76
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Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:38:35 AM in AEST
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You see my eyes are open. My point of view questioned. My comprehension far from rustin'. My young mind running in only one dirrection.
I proceed forward to have more than when I begun. Just to understand the balance is rullet.
I fiction the cycle and the sun. Knowing all to well it will be in the stars.
For all of my life, I can remember and feel that love, but still I have yet to lose the scars.
(STRAY)
This isn't what I ment to write,but ****, light for life, if there's something to say, get it right! RIGHT?
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2007-02-12 11:38:35]
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Re: point in question
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:54:46 AM AEST
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rhei76, Right as we all strive to try our best to get it right. I really liked the message behind this awesome poem composed by a very gifted poet. Thank you for sharing both a little of yourself and your gift of poetry with all of us.
Thank You for the awesome comments.
Your Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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