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A Mother's Wish
Contributed by
europeanprincess
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Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish you were back home with me
I sit near the window and watch a bird fly
I think about you time after time
You made me laugh when I would cry
You made cookies and apple pie
I wanted to teach you so much more
But I know youre old enough to do it alone
I didn't want to see you go
My heart stopped when you walked out the door
Remember how we sang off tune,
Or laughed when I tickled you?
Remember our old carving tree?
How about the autumn leaves?
I remember how you sat by me
We read books until you were fourteen
By the way, I still can't find my favorite pen
Oh how I miss my best friend
I wish you were back home with me
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2007-02-12 19:21:22]
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Re: A Mother's Wish
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:31:20 PM AEST
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Wonderful sentiment and delivered in fine metric.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: A Mother's Wish
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:39:14 AM AEST
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a beautiful write.. you can feel the missing of your mom in this piece it was well expressed.. well penned out
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Re: A Mother's Wish
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:16:29 PM AEST
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| I hope one of my children write a poem like that. Touching and full of a heartful of memories. Nicely presented |
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Re: A Mother's Wish
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 04:09:28 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful reflection.
Your tones of home sound so caressing. |
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