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So alone Here On My Own
Contributed by
tee8t7
on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I feel so alone
In my home all on my own
Sure I can do whatever I please
But sometimes I wish someone were there to guide me
So alone
I feel so unknown
All by myself
All I have is my health
But sometimes that just isn't enough
Because being alone is oh so tough
I spend my life waiting
Instead I should be participating
I guess I leave myself out
So I'll never know what now being alone is about
So alone
Here on my own
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tee8t7
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2007-02-12 19:44:16]
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Re: So alone Here On My Own
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:50:40 PM AEST
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| OUTSTANDING! i know that its a lonely poem but this is so good. i felt the same way when i was on my own for the first time. i wish i could have thought of these words. you beat me to it. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: So alone Here On My Own
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:46:37 AM AEST
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tee8t7, I really liked the message within this outstanding composure. We have all felt alone at times through our lives and you have created such a beautiful reflection expressing some of the related feelings. I want to thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with us all and especially for sharing your wonderfiul talent. I hope you know that you did a great thing when you reached for your poetic pen because you reached out and made your readers bear a warm grin. Good job.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: So alone Here On My Own
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:13:32 PM AEST
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| A very enjoyable read. Keep writing! |
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Re: So alone Here On My Own
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 01:33:10 PM AEST
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wow this is well penned out feelings of lonliness. this is a sad write.. its very powerful and gets its messege across well
vampyress Jenni |
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