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Only Five
Contributed by
needledancing
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Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 08:56:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Im only five and Im bigger than you.
Only five and can do up my shoe.
Cant cook with stoves or do my own wash,
Cant go to stores with my money, Oh gosh.
I read well at school and can brush my own teeth,
Can make up my bed and still crawl beneath.
Do up my buttons and zippers alone,
Yet Mom says to little to answer the phone.
I know most of the words to all nursery rhymes,
Can sort out the quarters and nickels and dimes.
Tie up my shoes and fasten my coat,
Know elephants, from camels and goats.
Still Im only five and Mom tells me each day,
To enjoy being little and go out and play.
I skip by the flowers that grow on my street.
I love getting barefoot and stretching my feet.
Tomorrow is special I cant spoil the surprise.
I have a secret, Ill be changing size.
Moms baking and decorating and getting things to fix,
Cause tomorrows my Birthday and I will be six.
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needledancing
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Re: Only Five
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:52:24 PM AEST
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This was delightful and carried me back to the joy of finger painting and sheer wonder.
Well Done & Bravo
Peace
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Re: Only Five
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 02:02:07 AM AEST
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This is skipity beautifull.
Awesome and very visablly written.
Big smiles,
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Re: Only Five
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 02:02:49 AM AEST
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This is skipity beautifull.
Awesome and very visablly written.
Big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Only Five
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:57:36 PM AEST
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| Great write!I've enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Only Five
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by Dom on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:19:43 PM AEST
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Thank you, this really made me smile! I love all the details, it really took me back to when I was that young and feeling proud of the "grown-up" things I could do!
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