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Relapse Convention
Contributed by
ediii
on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 09:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Crazy crazy in my mind, fealing pills on big declines snort or swallow feeling shallow no one cares or sees the mellow sight of "crazy" in my eyes no one then saw through my lies in the cup of liquid fly many birds by snakes to cry. Nonsense words filling my mind let them go out of this earthly kind of motion sickness implying well the red flames framing the gates of hell. Continous shakes sublime my hand When I look I see the land of what is gone but yet to come cuz all advice just becomes dumb, If you want to, go ahead, relapse creeping in your head. Enjoy the deed or say aloud what leads you to this unholy ground. Be aware of what's to come, as both of these won't go by numb. Both consequences bear along so it's hard to choose which way to go. Both directions wrong and right either way you're still in the fight. That never ending set of blows that lay you down and hurt your nose. So no advice here, what so ever You must not say that is too clever the one that good advice has issued for he will never know your tissue. When you lapse and it goes well, you'll end up with me in hell. If you hold out for a little while it will occur only later in your file. So live your life and make good choices we only get to live it once. Do not listen to those outside voices, the one inside you is the one that counts.
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Re: Relapse Convention
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:14:24 AM AEST (User
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Very creative writing that captures the reader in the beginning.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Relapse Convention
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:07:48 AM AEST (User
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This is excellent. Only a journey made could uncover such intense wisdom of how to feel it. Thanks |
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