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picture different lenses
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 12:42:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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cob webbed corners with windowless views
a darkened bedroom covered with old thoughts and fallen dreams
sunken truths that spit in your eye
trying to picture different lenses
to sharpen distorted views
clouded with mystery a willow in the marsh
destined for indifference a spiders lonely web
capturing the prey that fall and the weak that slowly step
driven by anger and the coldness of the sea
dust ridden paths behind a crossroads if you be
longing for the spite i deserve and the fall from higher grace
to be torn and ridiculed to be hated to be stripped
to be open to the world and to be pure
to show that fear is nothing and we can live
we can overcome
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2007-02-15 00:42:06]
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Re: picture different lenses
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 01:39:55 PM AEST
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A powerful theme with lots to explore and develop. Yes I agree wholeheartedly 'we can overcome.'
Well Done
Peace
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