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I Can't
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
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Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 07:32:23 AM in AEST
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I could play another love song.
but I think I just ran out of tears.
I could play my detuned guitar,
but I'm so weak I could barely hold it.
I could go for a long walk,
but every path leads me to a place we know.
I could go out for a drink,
but I just can't find a bar we have not been.
I could move somewhere far away,
but I know your memory will remain.
I could try to find someone new,
but in my heart you will always be.
I should do all these things,
but I can't.
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steven_fenton1982
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2007-02-15 07:32:23]
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Re: I Can't
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:22:27 AM AEST
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| A good reminder that time heals all. |
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Re: I Can't
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:22:13 AM AEST
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I felt this poem in my heart .....
but dya know what?
YOU CAN!!! ( and will just not straight away )
Good luck
Dee xx |
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Re: I Can't
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:37:16 AM AEST
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This is awesome, you write what every man including my self after a life time of marriage,
hope's he'll never have to say. beautiful work along with a most appropriate style. can't give you happeniness but i will give you 5 stars. thanks for sharing this peice of true beauty and sincerity.
and thanks also for your comment and readership.
myheartsvoice
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Re: I Can't
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:46:43 AM AEST
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The classic understanding in behavioral therapy is:
"I Can't means I Won't." which is entirely OK in this case and as mentioned with time your heart will heal. So the next time you get the urge Try To and bring her memory to life in honor rather than dysfunction something I am sure she would have wanted.
Blessings
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Re: I Can't
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 12:55:21 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling. Beautifully written. |
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