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From Miss To Misses
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:24:41 AM in AEST
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How
should i put it
is there a way what word's
do i use to define? for i would need
more than merely a day or a word like
valentine. I'd say forever would be a good
start begining with long ago, when i ask you
to be my eternity as my heart whisperd i love
you so. That night that i saw more than beauty
like none ever seen before, for in front of me
stood my wife to be knocking on my hearts
door. With tears in my eyes and a
smile on my face as we
drowned in
each
others kisses,
forever my heart
became your place as
you went from miss to
misses.
myheartsvoice
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2007-02-15 09:24:41]
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:29:46 AM AEST
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| very touching :) nice |
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:46:47 AM AEST
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myheartsvoice, what a beautiful composure that screams out love. The title is perfect as it sets the stage for your sincere words of love that gently reaches out to warmly touch your readers. Outstanding poem my friend.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:20:34 AM AEST
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You ole romantic you !
loved it!
Dee xx |
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:40:06 AM AEST
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Your work is dedicated to such a depth of love that it snatches the breath and makes me smile feeling a mind so connected to its heart. Kudos to your work and bravo to your love.
Peace
Yang |
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:56:18 AM AEST
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another beautiful dedication write to your wife.. Ibet she loves this.. this is an exquiste devotional masterpiece
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: From Miss To Misses
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:33:03 PM AEST
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| Deep and meaningful write.You don't even have to go stand on the highest mountain and shout it out,as this poem says it all...LOVE! Beautiful write! Oceandreamer |
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