|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Hallmark cards can't say it all.
Contributed by
Faust
on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 02:05:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
A feeling of romance's cost
once verything has been lost.
This love of ours is getting older
though it will not get much bolder.
I dreamt that I could smell the flowers
left for you by a heart that cowers.
Pacing around in my room
wishing I could just see you
standing here right next to me
so I could finally sleep peace.
I sweat though I've never been colder
Oh how I wish I could hold or
simply sit and hear your voice
but letters seem of our choice.
These halmark cards can't say it all
as we sit and watch the stars fall.
Bewitched as the fireflies incircle our hearts
showing glimpses of you in the dark.
A flash of light and I can see you
gazing into my deep eyes too.
our hearts were beating loud as wever
in unity, they can't dissever.
They hold our love as we hold eachother
underneath this dark black cover.
Copyright ©
Faust
... [
2007-02-15 14:05:38]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Hallmark cards can't say it all.
(User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 05:46:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nicely done. |
|
|
Re: Hallmark cards can't say it all.
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 09:38:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow this is awesome and could put Hallmark to shame.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: Hallmark cards can't say it all.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:35:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nicely done
now hallmart should hire you to write there cards. :) |
|
|
Re: Hallmark cards can't say it all.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lenore_Poe15 on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 05:02:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good write as always
-Love always
Lenore |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
