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Your Sun Shine
Contributed by
untitled
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Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 05:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun is shining down on me
I can't help but smile!
When I'm loney
all alone
I can still see the sun shine
I know you're watching me
all the way up there
So I know I'm not alone
when I see the sun smile.
The gold melts into the window
and floats up to my eyes,
you once did say you could look at them forever...
you loved when no one did
you hugged me when I was cold
The memory of your kisses...
they still make me laugh
You told I was beautiful
dispite the proof in the mirror
You held me, and let me cry
till the tears refused to come...
and the sadness had left with them
I can still look at the sun
and remember what golden a time we had,
when I had you.
But you got old
You got sick
and you eventually left me behind
but I still remember you're golden face
and I remember your sun shine
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:16:14 PM AEST
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preccious recollection of beautiful memories.
nice job |
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by feralpen on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:21:18 PM AEST
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| Real or not, the love and warmth come shining through. I'm sure 'Grammas' everywhere will love your poem. Heartfelt and sincere, your write is beautiful and gives great testimony to your talent and compassion. |
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:16:43 PM AEST
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Indecribale write!
It's a masterpeice!
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:17:19 PM AEST
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Indecribale write!
It's a masterpeice!
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:17:23 PM AEST
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Indecribale write!
It's a masterpeice!
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Your Sun Shine
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by untitled on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:03:56 PM AEST
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| as i think about it, i realize this poem might have been inspired by my mom, she use to sing "you are my sun shine" when i was little, course she's still alive, but hey, what are ya gonna do?? |
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