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Dejavu
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 06:37:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Cumulous cloud formations,
traverse the expansive sapphire-like sky.
A host of God's angels on ready alert,
a lightening bolt will beam them to earth;
brightly reflecting off Alabaster.
A gust of wind tousles our hair,
combed by the spirits present there.
Searching for an explanation,
to life's unique situation,
a mystery of space and time.
In the stillness our Conductor is poised,
a single melodious songbird, the only noise.
Nature's voice vibrates to crescendo;
a magnificent refrain, a tribute to spring.
What an awesome symphony!
Nature's show, a spectacle to behold.
Savor the nostalgic memories that blossom and grow,
A familiarity emerges,
as if we had been there before.
A bewildering sensation unfolds.
Excitement permeates the air,
with an awesome array of associations.
Is this a form of reality renewed?
Perhaps a reincarnation...
certainly an episode of dejavu!
Copyright ©
Willofree
... [
2007-02-15 18:37:33]
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Re: Dejavu
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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Don't know where it come from either but I luv it!
Awesome!
big huggs,
emy
This write is very magical. |
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Re: Dejavu
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:35:55 AM AEST
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Reading this gives me a somewhat euphoric feeling, and I can't help but think there was a certain elation in penning this piece. I really think this should have been placed under the "Inspirational" topic, but maybe it's just me. Either way, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Will.
~Scorp. |
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Re: Dejavu
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 03:35:45 PM AEST
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I especially like the buildup to the third stanza!
An awsome symphony indeed! |
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Re: Dejavu
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:57:32 AM AEST
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Gotta love those "just there" writes. I like the playful way you move around the rhyme pattern. The first time it changed up threw me a bit, but then I went back and settled into the words more, focusing less on the way they were woven and more on the imagery. I rather like this one Terry.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Dejavu
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 07:11:44 AM AEST
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this is beautiful............
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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