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The Dark Abyss
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 01:02:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Living in a world of darkness
a cold chill crosses my path.
Looking and listening at the sounds around me,
and hearing nor seeing anything.
Surrounded by hate and despair,
I watch as the world tears itself apart.
I am but a lonely candle shining so delicate
I only see what is around me, the world blinds the rest.
I look out each day to find another candle like me,
another stuck in this darkness, another searching for me.
Where are you, candle?
Are you looking for me to?
I am stuck in this dark abyss,
and I search each day for your light.
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
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2007-02-16 01:02:08]
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Re: The Dark Abyss
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 02:51:21 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Dark Abyss
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by Oceandreamer on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 04:00:40 PM AEST
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| Mysterious and intense write.I like it a lot! Oceandreamer |
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