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No More An Alien.
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:43:47 AM in AEST
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A Year rolled by in a blinking moment
it seems yesterday my depressed soul yearned
for a grief free goal - after my loves departed
soul snuffed along my bliss filled world.
My sinking life boat in midst
of the salty tear filled sea, saw
a link of hope beyond the
techno horizon.
A strange web* fished me out
like a knight in shining armor.
Reviled to me an peerless world;
though strangers from deferent
domain and creed, I felt oneness, as
They spoke the tongue of my own soul.
A pal in Lisbon, Bros from
LA nd NY, a gal from Caribbean shores
the galloping cow boy from Mexico
were no more alien to me
or hearts across the mighty oceans,
nor countries and states I seldom heard.
Imparting grief and happiness,
joy and pain, love and hate like a family
that I once had.
My delighted heart leaps and signs the song
of bliss for my new found family; just all this
I have.
(YPDC*).
FRANCO.
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-02-16 06:43:47]
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Re: No More An Alien.
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:56:45 AM AEST
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this is a really beautiful poem i love the title and how well you used your words to describe what u feel
fantastic |
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Re: No More An Alien.
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by soulsearching43 on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:02:10 AM AEST
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| great poem i'm pretty new to this site but i know how you feel. it has been a haven for me as well. you express it wonderfully |
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Re: No More An Alien.
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by needledancing on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 09:51:31 AM AEST
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| Bravo...I think this is super excellent. Now that's good poetry.Sounds like darkness is behind you and the inner soul is shining. I think this is perfect. |
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Re: No More An Alien.
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:52:35 AM AEST
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A great tribute to a full year on YPDC i have been here almost since the site started a very belated welcome aboard to you Franco.
great write |
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Re: No More An Alien.
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 01:26:11 AM AEST
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What a moving write. This is a beautiful piece Thank you for sharing.
Whisper |
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