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Emotional Vampires
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 06:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Liars and cheats have no remose,
they live in a world thats shallow and force,
they seem to get a high from your pain,
they do it over and over again,
In the end part of you dies,
you always feel tears pricking your eyes,
you cant see a point in going on,
they make you feel, your in the wrong,
Then all self confidence goes,
as you lose yours theres just grows,
you have to fight back, I know its hard,
just always make sure your on your guard,
Throw the losers out of your life,
dont let them win and stick in the knife,
it took a long time, but I can see,
theres someone out there who will love me..
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2007-02-16 06:58:46]
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by soulsearching43 on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:57:13 AM AEST
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this is beautifully written and so true. life is full of emotional vampires thanks for shedding some light on a few
dawn |
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by feralpen on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:07:25 AM AEST
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| You show a great strength in your poetry and your life. Your write is full of resolve and determination. Good writing, keep it up! |
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by Grownbabygirl on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 08:30:33 PM AEST
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| Very true and inspirational...thank you for your thoughts. |
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:50:03 AM AEST
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Ver good writing. I can so relate. Great advise.
huggs,
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:54:17 AM AEST
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This was good. I liked the emotions in this. Read smoothly and it was a very good poem.
Take Care
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Re: Emotional Vampires
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 05:22:59 AM AEST
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excellent write!
love n' hugs nessa
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