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Lifes Not Fair (rewritten)
Contributed by
soulsearching43
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 07:56:55 AM in AEST
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You see their anguished faces almost every day
and yet most people wish they would just go away
The clothes they wear are tattered their eyes hold vacant stares
and amazingly enough it seems still nobody cares
No one ever thinks this could possibly happen to them
and because of this they are often to quick to condemn
But I can tell you ,you are wrong you just dont understand
sometimes life can be messed up and you never know where you'll land
One day your life is happy, your home and all is well
then tragedy strikes and suddenly you find yourself in hell
Desperately you try to hold on to all that you've got
but before you know whats happening thats not a lot
And when you realize that you've lost all that you acquired
it's hard to find the strength inside to feel very inspired
So next time when you see that vacant look of despair
Count your blessings and try to remember that lifes not always fair
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Re: Lifes Not Fair (rewritten)
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:30:32 AM AEST
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| Its brilliant I wrote a poem called homless and can understand just what your saying, there for the grace of god go I.. It can happen to anyone of us we should never condemm or judge anyone.. xxx |
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Re: Lifes Not Fair (rewritten)
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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Here here!
Loved it
Dee xx |
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Re: Lifes Not Fair (rewritten)
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by brew on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 01:35:58 PM AEST
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NO Life isnt fair......what a title.......But its not what we always want...we need to look for what is needed. beautiful post.....yes, i agree 100 % on what you penned.....Your words tell all. keep posting
brew~ aka dayna |
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