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~Masterpiece Destiny~
Contributed by
misfitme
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Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 10:53:16 PM in AEST
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Alas...the universes vibrational content~
an omni~present collection of all to it lent
Which has only ever reflected for us in kind~
the decision & deeds by which our lives are defined...
So as the menaced state now on it inflicted~
has in turn becomes ours, who are by it depicted
For the crimes against self & others we perpetrate~
return unto us alone as damnable fate...
Yet, were consideration we to extend in this~
the opportunity to have a hand in not miss
Then might even the willfully blind come to see~
We are all Karmic Artists whose Masterpiece is Destiny...
~PHILOSOTRY~
Copyright ©
misfitme
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2007-02-16 22:53:16]
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 10:58:27 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful and deep, the last line sealing it off perfectly. Absolutely well done. |
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:51:58 AM AEST
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Oh my KerryLynne! That last line is immensely powerful!!!
Karma is a commanding and, at times, overwhelming
notinon, yes? Your words strike a chord in the hearts
of those who would emotionally embrace life in all its
glory and shame. What we send out to the universe,
ultimately comes back .. of this I am certain!
Excellent job, here.
~Breezy |
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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I mentally spun into a world where I was a Comic Scientist with a Daily Blog-Berry's entry a hand held effort to change the world so I created the Pope-on-a-Rope with instructions to wash here and this way in case of feeling sinful or repairing damaged goods.
I then realized I was fantasizing to the hypnotic pace of this piece and it hit me this is another way of saying "You Create Your Own Reality" or so I surmised.
Peace
AJ
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~
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by FrogHoppin on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:51:41 PM AEST
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*INSTANT KARMAS GONNA' GET CHA'..."-John Lennon
but, I think the meat of this truth lies here...
"& We All Shine On
Like the Moon & the Stars & the Sun
Yes, We All Shine On, On & On & On..." |
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Re: ~Masterpiece Destiny~
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:54:33 AM AEST
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Again you touch a nerve with your literary intensity, A most provacitive peice this is not to mention the inner aggitation of these words that seek out answers. beautifuly
presented.
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