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Only Nine
Contributed by
trialnerror
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Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:17:02 AM in AEST
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We live , and we die
But why she, tell me why?
A flower, which did not yet bloom
Has left this world, and everything so gloom
Life is a tyrant for it chooses,
Who deserves it, and who looses
Its not fair that she was taken,
God must have mistaken,
An innocent soul so young
Her laughter was a song to be sung
One day everything was truly fine
Suddenly a baby girl has died, and she was only nine.
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Re: Only Nine
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:34:08 AM AEST
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trialnerror, You give us another poem to savor that is packed with such deep emotions. The message may be sad but another composure by you makes us all glad. The part of this poem that really touched my heart was, " It's not fair that she was taken, God must have mistaken," Trying to understand a loss is hard and I try to keep it a positive thing by thinking that God wanted a special angel by his side. I want to thank you once again for giving us all a part of your heart and for creating such a heartfelt poem with your love.
Your Dear Friend
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Re: Only Nine
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 12:37:05 PM AEST
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| Only the good die young will never be a comfort to see our children torn from us. I could never imagine the pain. I pray I never have to see a child my heart is wrapped around perish before I do. Well written and you now how learned how precious each moment is...... |
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Re: Only Nine
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 08:44:06 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry for your loss. She was young and only the good dies young. |
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Re: Only Nine
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:10:47 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching but great writing.
I'll say a prayer for all.
Big luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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